Alluring Alliteration

I didn’t get to participate in the Smut Marathon this year. I signed up to, but the first deadline slipped me by in spite of reminders. Just happens sometimes. But here are the three sentences I wrote. The assignment had us to write one sentence using alliteration. And it had to be smutty, obvs. Let me know what you think!

Karen keened through the thorough tonguing, her teeth teasing her bottom lip nearly tearing tender skin til she thought she’d swoon from the sinful sensation.  

Karen keened through her teeth as the tender tonguing of scarlet skin continued, til she thought she’d swoon from the sinful sensation.  

Karen keened through her teeth as the tender tonguing of scarlet skin continued, fingers making fists and cries crescendoing til she came.

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